CAN YOU PLEASE TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK OF THE FIRST HALF OF CH.1?

that was really really good. u should keep writing more. i really liked it. there where two mistakes i think... when u said "He greeting my dad and mom" i think u mean greeted? and also "how are THEY related too US" too should be to? there was something else but i cant remember what it was lol but that was really good i enjoyed it.